Mi Hermana
9 October 2008
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My sweet sister in law made me an essay about how much she misses me. I am posting it, and my response to it here: Oh, How I Long For My Sister By: Kafaleen I appreciate Jennifer's sassy charm and quick wit. She makes me laugh all the time, and I miss laughing all the time. Ryan does a pretty good job of keeping the laughter rolling, but there's a certain piece missing....and that piece is my sister. I appreciate Jennifer's fabulous cooking and baking skills! Her apple crisp, sugar cookies, and breakfasts are the best. I wonder how Mother's day brunch will turn out in May. If there is no Jennifer, perhaps we will have to celebrate at Butterfields. When it comes to food, I realize how much I miss Jennifer's cooking, and how I should never take it for granted. Yoga seems boring and unfun. I have tried to go and make the best of it, but its no fun looking over to my neighbor and seeing someone other than Jennifer. I have lost my passion for yoga and it is all because my sister has left me. I appreciated her getting me involved in yoga...and I have even lost my taste for bagels. I appreciate Jennifer giving me beauty and health tips. For without her, I might be blind right now. I guess I never realized how much Jennifer means to me, and I hope through this short essay, she realizes how down in the dumps life is without her and she would just pack up her exotic London life and get back home!! The Five Senses of A Sister by JeniSpacePod When I close my eyes, I see Kathleen on the couch next to me, Wii steering wheel gripped tightly in her hand, speeding through MarioWorld. I see her grimace with determination, then resignation, as I race by her to victory. When I open my mouth to talk, I am filled with the memory of a mouth full of apple cinnamon bagel with (discontinued maple) cream cheese, which always tasted best when it was Kathleen's turn to pay. And then I think about the way she samples the same 18 flavors of gelato each time, just so she can get an extra helping for free. When I hear the garbage truck rumble down the street, my ears remember the sound of Kathleen's crazy laugh, and it makes me smile. I also remember her "Rarrrrrrrr!" and I tremble in fear. When I go to sleep at night and feel the cozy blankets around me, I remember buying Kathleen a nap set for Christmas, and how even though she says she only uses it every other day, she probably uses it every single day. And when I smell flowers in the fancy / exotic gardens of London, I think about how Kathleen always puts flowers on her holiday table. And then I miss her some more.Since my hard drive broke, I don't have a picture of Kathleen and me so these geese will have to do.












If I had known my short essay would end up on the blog, I think I would have corrected some spelling and grammatical errors. Wow, your poem brought tears to my eyes Jeni. And the picture of the geese is way better than any picture of me!
Five senses, huh?? Great idea for a poem. I might have to read your poem when I teach the chapter on Sensation and Perception, as we go over the 5 senses.
Please use it in any way you see fit.
You know in some countries, you two would be picking out furniture…
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